

Date: 02-28-09 - 12:56 pm Title: Pitch Black
this is good...
good pace...
good characterization...
nice
Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 2 is coming up soon!

Date: 02-27-09 - 06:46 pm Title: Pitch Black
Hehehehe!!! I've always told you I loved this fic!!! BUT FINALLY YOU POSTED IT HON!!!!!! YAY!!!! I again, must say I LOVE THIS FIC!!! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter!!! Great job sweets!!!!
Author's Response: OMG! Your reviewed! Yay! Yeah...I FINALLY got off my butt and posted something (for a change) -- Next Chapter coming up soon :D

Date: 02-27-09 - 06:21 pm Title: Pitch Black
Those last three lines were priceless.
This was entertaining and easy to read. It definitely feels like a Last Stand fic, but I can't wait to see what you bring to the table. I like Logan's slow look around her room. Scoping it out! He's such a dog!
Author's Response: Logan's look around her room was one of my favorite things to write. Things will get...interesting... xD Thank you so much for the kind review, you really made my day!