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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-08 - 10:13 am Title: Talk Show Host

Excellent cliffhanger. Poor Logan. I love the tone and how she's so cool and hard. I can't wait to see what she does next, if you update this.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-08 - 10:44 pm Title: Talk Show Host

Great Chapter!!!

I can't wait to find out what's going on with Ororo.

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Date: 07-02-06 - 06:38 pm Title: Number One Crush

This can't be all there is! The first thing that caught my eye was the title because I happened to be listening to the Romeo and Juliet soundtrack and what was on? What else? One Inch Punch's "Pretty Piece of Flesh." Very nicely done. I've seen a lot of pairings in my day, but I think this is the first time (assuming here) I've read a story that even hinted at an Apocalyse/Ororo pairing. How I do love odd pairings. ;) I do hope you continue. I would love to see an update because I am very intrigued.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 04:08 pm Title: Number One Crush

uh oh Logan is on the prowl...and not in a good way

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 04:01 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

wow! 'Ro is cheating on her husband with Logan and on Logan with some other guy? Did i get it right?

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-30-06 - 07:18 pm Title: Number One Crush

ps. Love you. Consider your soul safe...for now.

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Date: 06-30-06 - 07:17 pm Title: Number One Crush

**rubs hands together ala Mr. Burns** Excellent, Smithers, Excellent.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-30-06 - 05:50 pm Title: Number One Crush

Intense, for something so short. Still doesn't mean I've stopped waiting for my Scabbed Wings fix, though. You still have to add on to that. But this was good.

As for a beta read, "threatening" needs a quick fix of that typo, and the period needs to be moved inside the quote on this line, "Know that you're mine". A comma before "betrayal" where you have "and later betrayal" would be good, too, for emphasis: "...and later, betrayal."

Wish you could write more often. I enjoy your stuff.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-07-06 - 02:00 am Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

What was that? Need more infirmation.

Reviewer: MDancer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-26-05 - 08:42 am Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

Excellent! Got the drama, the action,...just everythingi n this sweetly wicked short piece. Good job. I'm surprised at Ororo doing this to Logan, but wow. It's great. Poor Logan. This can't be it? lol ; )

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-05 - 11:35 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

Intense! I love it! You need to write more! Of this, of anything! Awesome!

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-05 - 02:36 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

Damn Layde...well written, love how you're elusive as to who the guys is, let us draw our own conclusions. I can't wait for more, there will be more yes???

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-20-05 - 04:35 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

Damn. That's ice cold. Your words are wonderful. Your description of events, ethereal

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-05 - 10:44 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

That was really good, but I'm a little confused was that Logan, Ororo was cheating? Either way still really good for such a short piece.

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-05 - 01:14 pm Title: Pretty Piece of Flesh

HOLY COW!!!! wowowow! I can't begin to describe it... it's amazing! I feel so lost though... Ro cheating? Was that Wolvie? Ohhhh man! Write more!!!

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