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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 05-17-14 - 10:40 pm Title: Epilogue

I feel so foolish, but I have to admit that I have attempted to read this so many times and stopped. Today I determined to, and am glad I did. Though it is heartwrenchingly sad in some ways, it was such a compelling story. For me it was difficult to read because of the weight that James carried in his young life. Very imaginative, can't say I could ever think of such an impressive story arc. Well done. A A

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-28-06 - 07:29 pm Title: Prelude

OMG!!! I usually don't like rolo stories that aren't focusedon them, but you have a great gift of writing, and I loved this story!!! Absolutely loved it. Good work.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-06 - 08:43 am Title: Epilogue

im so sad to see this end there was so much untaped story line but writers block can be a bitch i think we all know that

Reviewer: joe mckee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-12-06 - 01:40 am Title: Epilogue

nice looks like james was able ta change the future after all :) but how did they find a cure??? other then that i enjoyed this

Author's Response: yeah how did they find the cure? I have no idea! =/ I hope I will one day and can write it down, but for now, it will be a mystery. Yeah I'm a sucker for happy endings, hope it wasn't too fluffy

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 10:09 am Title: The end?

na cant end here the story is to good to end so take your time if you have to and write more

plz write more

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 09:05 am Title: The end?

Poor James.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 08:23 am Title: Sinister's gift

ah, full circle. how sad for ororo :(

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 08:41 am Title: Sinister's gift

Brilliant twist. That was decidedly unexpected and yet somehow so very appropriate. James in all his rage and hate never thought to question--just wanted revenge. Fantastic!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 08:36 am Title: Sinister's gift

i knew there would be a cathch i just didnt know it would be this bad. but still very intereting story did james die? or is he goine to be saved some how? hurry right more plz

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-06-06 - 09:47 am Title: Revenge?

wow. so suspicious. AND SO SHORT? MORE!! MORE!!! please, :)

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-06-06 - 09:31 am Title: Revenge?

Too short!! I need more!! :D

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-05 - 10:36 am Title: Arrival

Well, I'm caught up. Both in the reading and in the story. This is an intricate tale woven with deep thought and heartbreaking emotion. I hope you update far sooner with another chapter, as my imagination has taken flight and I wonder why Wolverine would kill someone he obviously loved. The why's are making my brain itch lol. More soon, purty please.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-05 - 01:03 am Title: Arrival

Fantastic. Whole story. Nothing but Fantastic.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-05 - 06:44 pm Title: Arrival

god this is god cant wait to see how this plays out and i cant wait tuntil i find out why he killed storm

Author's Response: Thank you =) I hope I'll give the answer in the next couple of chapters. not many left now ;)

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-12-05 - 08:47 am Title: Proving his worth

to get what he wants he had to make a deal with the deevil interresting. but who was raven working for? i like this story because its not conventional keep up the good work

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