

Date: 06-28-05 - 08:17 pm Title: Ro's Time
I love this story, there interaction is perfect. THIS is the 'Ro and Logan I love from the comics. You have captured them to perfection. I can't wait until the next chapter...I'm getting all anxious for some RoLo lovin', I hope you won't make us wait too long. :::wink:::

Date: 06-28-05 - 05:54 pm Title: Ro's Time
Noooooo... that is a horrible place to end a chapter. *pouts*

Date: 06-28-05 - 05:34 pm Title: Ro's Time
more plz lol

Date: 06-28-05 - 05:32 pm Title: Ro's Time
Why'd you stop? Oh, come on I need more. I'm really enjoying this tale. Her opening up to Logan is a big step in the right direction. And if I may suggest...take advantage of the hottub. *wink* Also, If I may make a teensy request? Longer chapters. I just get leaned in nice and close to my monitor and bam, over and I am left hanging. Don't leave me hanging. :) MORE!

Date: 06-27-05 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Interesting Conversations
They are so cute together. Yup, too bad for you Remy, Logan has our girl now. lol. I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see what Logan finds in Alberta. Fantastic work, keep it up!

Date: 06-27-05 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter 5: Interesting Conversations
I am enjoying this story, and though I feel for Remy, (I really do) I have to say I hope this trip brings Logan and "Ro closer... *much* closer :)... Keep up the good work!

Date: 06-25-05 - 11:54 pm Title: A State of Unrest
I think I'm feeling a litlte like WindRider1, wanting Ororo with both men but that's what's making this such a fun story. You still have a few typos but I won’t go into that because fast updates usually mean there’re more typos and since it doesn’t take any thing away from the story there’s no need to complain. In fact, I want to thank you for updating so quickly; it gives me something to look forward to.

Date: 06-25-05 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 : Not Alone
Hmm! Intriguing! It's so nice to see Logan's 'Origin's incorporated into a story. Very nice. And the past between Remy and Ororo was beyond surprising. I can't wait to see what may lie ahead for each of these characters for better or worse. Now in all good conscious I have to mention that there were a few typos such as ‘relieving’ instead of ‘reliving’ and I thought you'd want to know that whenever you end a line with quotation marks and someone's speaking and you have something like: 'Okay," He said - he shouldn't be capitalized. For example: "You ready?" she asked. It's still part of the sentence I suppose. Finally you slipped into present tense with Remy - Remy paces instead of Remy paced. Hope this helps you and please don't take it the wrong way because I'm really enjoying your story especially the fast updates and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Date: 06-25-05 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 2 : Busted
Oh my! I love this! I mentioned over at the OroroLogan Yahoo group that this promised to be intriguing and so it has! I really love the interaction you have going on here between Logan and Ro. Logan was so Logan! I enjoyed Remy's reflections and possible change of heart, livens up the story immensely. There're a few typos but overall this is truly nice and I'm loving this!

Date: 06-25-05 - 08:58 pm Title: A State of Unrest
I must say, I am really liking this. Visiting one's forgotten past is always interesting. Please update soon, I'm anxious to know what Logan is going to find in Alberta. :-)

Date: 06-25-05 - 08:57 pm Title: A State of Unrest
I love it. And ohhh, the agony of my heart, wanting her with both Remy and Logan. please update ASAP!

Date: 06-24-05 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 : Not Alone
Please continue! Storm miscarry Remy's baby, wow! I really like this story. :D

Date: 06-23-05 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 : Busted
Oh wow, nice chapter. I am really enjoying this story...keep the updates coming.

Date: 06-23-05 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2 : Busted
very niec keep them coming

Date: 06-23-05 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1: Acknowledgment
Nice story, I want to see where this is going, even though I think of Remy & Storm in a non-sexual role between them, just brother and sister, I like it. Hopefully storm and wolverine will be getting closer to one another out on the road. :)