I'm glad to see you over here, Bats and will read the other chapters I haven't had time to when I get to work and check out the Storm group. I did want to say that I'm intrigued by this story as I mentioned before. There are a few typos or where you've left out a word here or there but I've been able to keep up so far. I do think the use of contractions could be used a little more to make everyone sound more natural but other than that, again, I'm quite intrigued and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters when I get to work.

very nice but whos this girl logan is talking about and is she his? if so whos the mother even if she isnt his whos the mother and why the hell is sabertooth working at a school? can he even spell school?

nice story but i have two question is bishop a mutant in this and what went on with logan and red? write more so i can find out

Well you've got my attention. I'm glad when I can't sleep and I come on and there a new story...yay!!! Keep it coming.