My interest is definitely piqued by everything that's going on. You left just enough for me to draw conclusions--however right or wrong they may be--from this, but at the same time, there are still many questions I have. Great start. :) Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thanks...I am working on the next chapter right now and should be able to complete it and post it before sleeping. Please R&R and let me know whether your conclusions matched the story plot.