I like this beginning so far and how there was an instant attraction between Logan and Ororo. I also like the brother and sister aspect of Scott and Ororo as well as the the father daughter relationship of Charles and Ororo. I love stories where they actually act like a family and that deep bond they have shows.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know you can be a family without being actually related and think they would have that type of dynamic after being together for so long! I have six chapters so far so I will post another now. Prepare for drama soon! :) haha Jade