If angst is your goal, wonderful job. You seem to have a talent for character dialog and I like your interpretation of Ororo here. Thank you for sharing and will be looking for more. A A

Author's Response: I secretly really enjoy making my characters suffer. I don't know what it is, pain is just, for me, an easy emotion to write. So thank you very much. I hope my interpretation for Ororo doesn't stray to far from the movie-canon. Or. I don't know. I have my own movie-canon Ororo in mind, that you guys will get to see here as the story goes on. I'll have another chapter up soon!