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Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 08:22 pm Title: Deception
Date: 12-11-05 - 08:22 pm Title: Deception
That sneaky little Scott! He is up to no good and putting Ororo in danger at the same time. I wonder who he was talking to on the phone and why he has Ro involved. Good start to an interesting story!
Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 12:50 pm Title: Deception
Date: 12-11-05 - 12:50 pm Title: Deception
Oooooooohhhhh.....I can see a good story building here! Update soon. :D I'm intrigued as to what's going on.
Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-11-05 - 02:47 am Title: Deception
Date: 12-11-05 - 02:47 am Title: Deception
Nice start. You may wanna have a beta reader to just try and catch the few spelling errors, but other than that, nice start.
Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 11:43 pm Title: Deception
Date: 12-10-05 - 11:43 pm Title: Deception
oooo i'm liking this one, so far. sneaky sneaky scott...
Reviewer: BW Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 11:24 pm Title: Deception
Date: 12-10-05 - 11:24 pm Title: Deception
Just one thing....don't delay with the next update...now NOW....Pleaaassssseee!!
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