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Reviewer: Stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 02:42 am Title: "Hateful man"

Keep going.

Author's Response: Thanks, it goes slowly but I will try o keep going ;)

Reviewer: Stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 02:40 am Title: First meeting

I do adore P&P...a great story to use.

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-12-05 - 10:30 pm Title: First meeting

well, as a HUUUUUUGE p&p fan (second only to xmen), i've gotta say i'm excited about this one. you've got a good start! the only thing i'd suggest is maybe spacing out the paragraph a little more. it's sort of hard to read when it's in what big block. but other than that, good job! can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I understand what u meant about the spacing and have changed it a bit. Hope it's easier now. P&P is wonderful. I have yet to see the new movie adaption with Kiera Knightly. I worship the BBC miniseries with the droolworthy Colin Firth ;)

Reviewer: tyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-12-05 - 07:29 pm Title: First meeting

Sounds promising even if you don't know pride and predjudice. One question though.... "pale complexion" ??

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review. I hope to be able to keep yyour interest. I must recomend you to read Pride and Prejudice, and even to watch the miniseries with Colin Firth. It's one of my absolute favourites.

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