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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 01:56 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

Kendall really is a daddies girl. Everything he says and does is holy, heh. Ro's really having a hard time with her.
Scott and Ro... do they love each other? Just wondering. Ever since the last chapter, when they were about to "go their separate ways" after returning from the mall, I've been thinking about this. It just doesn't seem like it...

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 10:09 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

Hmmm....didnt' even know about this chapter. Was when I was reading the last chapter, I discovered that I was missing somethign and found this one.


Well I figured that both Scott an Ro were just marrying each other to sort create some balance of a familial life for the kids, and not really as an in-love pair, and also a level of protection for them. At least with Scott, Storm would be an equal partner and she wouldn't have to deal with him running off for shit. And in Scott's case he has an admirable woman/mother for his chidlren and also she won't die on him like 50 times.

Hopefully Wolverine and Storm find their way back to one another and I hope all the misunderstandings are cleared up. It looks like the only person who knows the truth is Storm, and Wolverine had no problem not fixing the situation between her and Rogue/jubilee, which I found off.

He should have at least told them what is really going and why Storm did what she did..bu then again maybe Wolverine doesn't know, because he chooses not too.

Wolverine is in dire need of character development in this story. Much like Cleansing he's still a prick.
VB

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 08:33 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

OK, you got me now.
1. Kendell needs her behind whip.
2.I fell so sorry for little James begin in this he seems
so cute and loveable.
3.This was funny was going to called the dog 'shitbag'
but, named it after his ex wife lover Scott, because the
dog had one eye, then Logan left the dog their for them to take care of it. Anit revenge sweet. I hope you still continue with this, I need to know how this is going to end.P

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 05:43 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

Ya know, as much as I'm enjoying this story, I'm about ready for Ororo and Logan to start acting like adults, and stop playing this one-up game. Kendall is a spoiled little brat, indulged way too much. As for Rogue and Jubilee, at least Kendall is still a little girl, these two need to GROW up. Marriages end. Priod.The only people in this fic that aren't working my nerves are Scott (yet!) and little James.

Other than that, great fic!!!

Author's Response: Hope the next chapter helps clear some things up...especially the one about Kendall being a brat and why Jubilee is so against Ororo.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 03:03 pm Title: Circles and Triangles

i was wondering where she was are you going to tell what happened or is it not important

i like how kendall is becoming more and more like her father with each chapter

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 04:08 am Title: Circles and Triangles

why are they together if they dont love each other?

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