an update is coming though right

Author's Response: Yup. Should have it up by the evening!!

She actually fried him? Wow... Can't blaim the girl for her feelings and actions towards her mom. Not after what she saw and what she made of it. I can't believe Ro didn't go to her after it happened but turned away instead. Yeah, to get Hank, but still... The kid just saw her mommy electrocuting her daddy!
And Logan is in her room now? What does he mean by "she got what she always wanted"?
This Ro and Logan are not the ones I know... Okay, Logan maybe. He really can be like this but Ro? I don't know. She's so... I can't describe it.
Can't wait for the next chapter though :)

Okay, now I can understand Kendall's animosity towards her mother. You did a great job of explaining.

I think this is my fav chapter so far.

she fried him wow and she wonders where things went wrong

Author's Response: Yup...dontcha think!!

I love this story, and my heart goes out to both of them. I hope Storm gets a bit more of the sympathy tho lol, she my fav character and although you have given her reason to break up the marriage i cant help but still feel a bit of resentment t her. and i hate that lol

one other question, the daughter, she has both a mixture of storms powers and wolverines?? I dont follow many of the comics so i'll ask you since i know you do. is this common for when mutants have children to inerit a mixture of both parents. If not y have you chosen to do so. many authors do this and i feel it can be a little uninventive

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The feeling that Storm is bit (understatement) harsh in this comes from the hard choice she has had to make....and her having to live with it. See, with this latest chapter, you get to know about her and why she did what she did. As for the powers question, Kendall Logan is an actual character from the 'What if?' series that Marvel publishes. Her codename was 'Torrent' and her powers were a mixture of her mother and father's....i.e. weather+feral+healing. No claws though. From what I have seen, it is usually shown that the child has something from atleast one if not both parents. eg. Marvel Girl, Polaris, Nocturne, Cable. As for your last point, I avoid using too many OCs in my fics. Using a named (already existing) character gives sort of familiarity that OCs lack and have to build up.