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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 08:07 pm Title: Instinctual Emotions

Ohhh, Kendall slipping into berserker mode... now that could cause some damage I guess, heh. Maybe that's what Logan has been training her? To control the rage, keep it in check...
And what the hell is the big secret? Everything fell into place!? Yeah, right... I'm sitting here completely clueless, wanting to know what Charles knows! Damn! Spill it! ;) LOL
Matt Murdock, huh? Now things get even more interesting. Or should I say confusing? Argh, I need some answers! Like, now :D
... feral windrider... that's so cute :)

Author's Response: Sorry if my fics have been confusing....hmm, you know what, no to the 'sorry'. ;) I wanted the readers to get confused and try and make up possible situations both in this fic and in x-ed. As for Charles and Matt, both will be there in the next chapter, along with Logan and of course, Ororo. As for the feral Windrider, that just came out of the blue.

Reviewer: Eris123 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 12:32 am Title: Instinctual Emotions

Man oh man, this is getting really crazy really fast! Who were those two on the phone? I can't wait to find out... no seriously, I can't wait! Update soon!
Keep up the good work, BW!!!

Author's Response: The phone conversation and its results will be revealed in the next chapter. As with a couple of other things.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 08:50 pm Title: Instinctual Emotions

i am loving the kendall/logan connection daddy and daughter are great together. i do not like ro in this she is acting too bitchy.

Author's Response: Bitchy!! Hey, that got left behind quite some time back. Now, she is just confused.

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 06:57 pm Title: Instinctual Emotions

I don't like the way this ch ending looks. This is going to be real nasty is it? And, where is Logan anyway?
Sneeky devil been training his little girl. What has he
been training her, and has Logan begin training James too. Update when you can k.


Author's Response: James is still 'human' i.e. his mutation is still dormant. Unlike his sister, his wasn't active from birth itself. As for Logan and his lawyer...thanks to the reviews I've got a couple of new ideas which I will be trying out in the next update.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 03:26 am Title: Instinctual Emotions

"let's get ready to rrrumble!!!!!!!!!!' CUSTODY BATTLE??!! i'm so there.

Author's Response: Hmm. I didn't quite think of that, but now..... More in the next update!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 03:16 am Title: Instinctual Emotions

Whoa. Dark, scary stuff. I love the addition of Matt Murdock. You know things are gonna get ugly, somehow, now that Wolvie's got the best lawyer in the 616 universe. So, who will represent Storm? Jennifer Walters?

Author's Response: Storm already has a kick ass Lawyer. I was gonna name her (she was in the XXM series) but dropped the idea. It was just to name names....didn't appeal much.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 02:39 am Title: Instinctual Emotions

Damnit to hell 2 and half shockers in one fic...crazy man!! I loved this chapter..so far the best to throw in 2 1/2 shockers..wow!!

Well let's go throughthe list if your wondering....

We find out about the extent of Kendall's mutation which is frightening and great. I was so with 'Ro when she got worried about Kendall and the Berserker rage. If Kendall gets real pissed off and loses control the world would then just implode on it'self....crazy stuff that going on. And we know how bad Wolverine gets where he's nutty for years not just months.....Kendall would definitely mess up the planet....great dyanmic twist to her power setting. loved it.

Then we have Matt Murdock, holy shit. So what? Wolverine wants custody I guess. And that's crazy 'Ro is gonna go ballistic and anyway with this new developmemnt I think that 'Ro, Logan, kendall and their son need to go away to a cabin to reacquaint on many levels. as it can be clearly seen that Kendall needs her dad more than ever and just to give 'Ro some piece of mind.

Mind you that both 'Ro and Logan are out of control in this fic and both are in the wrong. And this new development is gonna cause some serious drama.

Now on to the half I was talking about. Well that's to do with Scott's statement to Xavier...what the hell is the secret. Obviously we know something is not as they seem and I'm starting to wonder if Scott even really proposed to Storm , or if Storm was with Scott for someone else.

What is such a secret since what their doing is something that Wolverine is out of the loop about, and why is Storm going on with this, if she is not really going with Scott but letting Wolverine think otherwise.

And if she's going with Scott the question again is raised as to why since we can obviously tell there's a whole different dynamic to the whole situation.

VB

Author's Response: You know, I was really worried about this chapter in the way that there wasn't any actual RoLo in it, but you proved me wrong. More on all your questions soon...a hint, its not gonna be happy...including the Logan-Ororo-Scott dynamic. BW

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