Date: 06-22-06 - 02:13 am Title: Fated to lose
I love this chapter, in the whole story I think this chapter was my fave. I mean we have the past and the present. Probably also the moment when Stormy was ill and she went to see Hank that she found out that she was terminal. I like the past because it gives us a bit more on Stormy and we probably get an idea of her motives.
I like that this was more than just Stormy hooking up with Scott. This was definitely about friendship. I also liked that it was focused so much on Storm...and her connection with her kids.
VB
Author's Response: Thanks. As with the last chapter (for Remy), I wanted this one to be about Ororo and what she had to go through for her to make a decision to act the way she had been and do what she tried to do. Glad it worked out.
Date: 06-21-06 - 06:21 pm Title: Fated to lose
So first Ro wants him back and then out of a sudden wants Logan to forget about her and move on. And all that within a span of a few days. Hm. I take it Hank found something. Something big.
Author's Response: You guessed right. Hope 'Ro doesn't get as much hate as she was earlier on in the story (from the readers).
Date: 06-20-06 - 11:55 pm Title: Fated to lose
oh thank god scott and ro aren't serious! it's just a rouse-doing happy dance:)
Author's Response: Well, I did say that Scott wouldnt't be the 'bad guy' here, and him marrying or having any sort of romance with Ororo would make him just that (in my book).
Date: 06-20-06 - 02:28 pm Title: Fated to lose
Okay now, this is new. Ororo wants Logan to move on with his life? I missed something; is something happening to Ororo? Clarify, please! She's worrying me!!!
Author's Response: You should read the last chapter (and also the hints I've been dropping in the previous ones). Also, this chapter isn't in current time, but a few months before now....before all this goes down.