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Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-06 - 02:16 am Title: Mending Hearts

Damn..poor Jubilee and Remy can't keep a secret to save his bloody life. Well..at least now they'll see her side of it. It was selfish of Stormy..but at the same time, I can see why she didnt' want to burden them. Didn't want to make the last moments be something where she's being smothered and nursed. At least when they hated her it wouldnt' feel like something of a burden to them.

But it's unfortunate that she's left her children with a pretty awful perception of her. They love her, just dont' seem to trust her. I'm glad wolvie is back. I wonder how he found out.

VB

Author's Response: Well, the children (or mainly Kendall) angle is one that I am still working out. That's why I mentioned that inspite of her intentions, Storm did fail. More on what she wanted...soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 06:39 pm Title: Mending Hearts

Finally the secret is out in the open. Not just for the reader but for the important people in Ro's life. So good to see Logan back. Can't wait to find out what his thoughts on this are.
I also would like to know what Ro's dying of... or what it is that would be worse than death. Doesn't sound too good... :/

Author's Response: You know, you are the only one who mentioned that small bit 'worse than death'. I had something else planned, something 'original', but decided to go with this (what she has now), and although not original, it struck me as a better choice.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:57 pm Title: Mending Hearts

as always great chapter but i have to know whats killing her?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for what's wrong with her....coming soon.

Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 11:47 am Title: Mending Hearts

i never thought whe was dying. i really want to see where you take this


Author's Response: Well, I had really closed myself into a corner...all for this. Hopefully the way out will work out the same if not better.

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 10:46 am Title: Mending Hearts

see, i knew they wouldnt have split up permantly becuase of Ororo's view of life and how you should never kill! i knew there had to be somthing else!

great tory, i'm really hopping for a happy ending!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Am working on the next chapter right now. As for a happy ending.....not quite sure how happy it will be.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:46 am Title: Mending Hearts

Perfect. Finally, some closure for Ororo and Jubes. Want to see if you ever resolve things between 'Ro and Kendall, now. It's been hard seeing the daughter that is practically her spitting image hating her guts.

Great ending. Give Logan that male point of view that you're so good at and some of those equally memorable lines.

Author's Response: I want to tie up all loose ends, (or atleast try to). Revealing Ororo's 'truth' was one, her 'thing' with Scott the other, and now this one had the whole triumverate of Rogue, Remy and Jubilee. Don't have anything planned yet for Kendall...and as for Logan, you have really put me in a 'position' there. Hope it reactions also are acceptable to you. ;)

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