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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 08:39 am Title: Alone…Again

So sad. I'm glad she called out to him when he was about to leave. Now he's gonna stay. Stay where he belongs. I hope they all will make the most of the remaining time they have together. And maybe, maybe (yeh, I'm still hoping ;) ), there's gonna be something to help Ro. Maybe now that she's with her other half again, she'll get back her inner balance and just up and heals. Gawd, I'm a lost cause LOL

Author's Response: You REALLY are a lost cause when it comes to sappy endings, aren't ya? ;) 'nyways, I like them myself...but seeing that I am trying to keep this fic as realistic as possible, I don't think the 'inner balance' will work.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-06 - 07:04 pm Title: Alone…Again

It makes sense. Every human being is born with the physical defect that will eventually kill them, so it makes sense that hers is also the mutation that she is blessed with. Good job working that in there. A tumor just wouldn't have done the trick, somehow. One itty bitty line needs fixing, and it will be perfect:

"He wanted to see, and her wanted to see her NOW!" Move "her" before the comma, and make the "her" into "he" before "wanted." Aw heck, you know what I'm talking about. Other than that, the line sums up what we know Logan is feeling perfectly.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee. I had had similar thoughts about the tumor/cancer scenario. Also, corrected the mistake. I know my writing is always chockful of typos. Thanks for pointing them out. BTW, check out the Storm wallpaper (Link) I posted on the groups.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-06 - 06:14 pm Title: Alone…Again

awww man! thats terrible ( i meant whats happening to ororo) ur writings amazing! makes me wanna cry :'( im hopin that theres more ta come!

Author's Response: Thanks for the complement an' sorry for the tears. Its just that this fic is gone very different from what I had envisoned when I started it. Yet, its nice to see that the readers like it.

Reviewer: kk1997 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-06 - 06:13 pm Title: Alone…Again

Please don't let Ororo die><
It's my first time to write an review for a story and I don't know what actually I should write......
Just please don't let her died~><
X3 is already a sad ending so please give us a happy ending><
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Author's Response: Thankks for a review an' for letting me your first (hehehe!!). As for whether Ororo lives and dies, don't know yet. All I can say is keep tuned.

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