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Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 08:07 pm Title: Days go by…

Hey...wow...very powerful..damn I cried. I mean it's more realistic to me that Ororo does die at the end, but you know those happy endings.

The entire chapter from paragraph to paragraph to paragraph it just grew progressively more depressing. I'm unsure if it needs an epilogue at all. I mean I think you already have a story that actually ends with Ro coming back to take Logan with her---including Kendall.

I say you leave it alone...or you have 'Ro coming back ala Jean Grey! :D All around great finale.

Author's Response: 'Roro pulling a Jean Grey? Hmm. Now, THAT would be a miracle. Storm-Phoenix anyone?

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 05:33 pm Title: Days go by…

This story practically is the epilogue. Heavy stuff. "Segue-wayed needs to be changed to "segued."

Funny image, James having an overactive pituitary gland. Guy's gonna be big!

Unless Hank's gonna pull a miracle out of his hat, I think you almost have your ending.

Author's Response: Posted the ending, well, one of the two I have/had in mind. Let me know if you want to read the other one too....the one with the 'miracle'.

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 01:50 pm Title: Days go by…

Bring him back his Ororo and bring their children back their Mammy.....[Crying..........]
'some happiness was needed after all that drama and angst.' it's what you said in Cleansing...........

Author's Response: Well, I have two endings in mind. Have posted one. Let me know if you want to read the second one too.

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 01:46 pm Title: Days go by…

Bring him back his Ororo...................>

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