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Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 09:09 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

i like this one better than the meteor ending. This one feels more real. The other idea was a cool ending though also. But the next fic- can it be happier PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: XLF Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 05:54 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

Dang I just knew I wasn't going to get out of this story without balling my eyes out - AGAIN! Really BW you need to give this poor ficivore a break. Ah well Maybe next sorry I will be able to get to the end of without you making me cry.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 05:36 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

This was a sad ending because Ororo is not physically with Logan and her family. But it is a sort of happy sadness because she does not completely leave Logan, who would have been truly devastated if she had.

Great storytelling. There was joy, anger, tears, sadness, every emotion. I think I would have preferred the "sappy-happy" ending, only because I usually like happy endings. But upon reflection, this ending was actually pretty good too.

Author's Response: Got the sappy-happy 'alternate ending' up. Hope u like that one too.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 02:17 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

You made me cry! Nicce ending to a whirlwind story. Beautiful.

Can we see some X-verse or Survial, now? How about the little kids story? I miss it so much I forgot the title.

Author's Response: Looking to update all those fics...soon. Have posted the alternate ending for this one.

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 02:08 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

Would there be a happy alternative ending~??!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE type it out....I want to read it~>

Author's Response: Well, I had planned on making this a 'sad' one so that it would offset the 'happy' one, but you gotta agree this isn't quite sad enough. Still, if there are enough reviews (asking) for it....I'll do the happy one too.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 02:04 am Title: The End (Alternate 1)

All right. Now we're talking. This is what kind of ending I was hoping to see, once you revealed in earlier chapters that she was dying. Not sappy, just poignant. I was hoping she would linger with Logan somehow. Kinda like Jean's holempathic crystal that she made for Rachel in the mainline comics. I loved this. Thanks for updating it on such a great note.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee. Although this one is/was my 'sad' ending, it wasn't just quite that. And for a happy one, it would have to be a little sappy (atleast the way I think/write). And Ororo does linger within Logan....and that too without powers such as Rogue.

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