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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 06:39 pm Title: Mending Hearts

Finally the secret is out in the open. Not just for the reader but for the important people in Ro's life. So good to see Logan back. Can't wait to find out what his thoughts on this are.
I also would like to know what Ro's dying of... or what it is that would be worse than death. Doesn't sound too good... :/

Author's Response: You know, you are the only one who mentioned that small bit 'worse than death'. I had something else planned, something 'original', but decided to go with this (what she has now), and although not original, it struck me as a better choice.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 06:21 pm Title: Fated to lose

So first Ro wants him back and then out of a sudden wants Logan to forget about her and move on. And all that within a span of a few days. Hm. I take it Hank found something. Something big.

Author's Response: You guessed right. Hope 'Ro doesn't get as much hate as she was earlier on in the story (from the readers).

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:57 pm Title: Mending Hearts

as always great chapter but i have to know whats killing her?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for what's wrong with her....coming soon.

Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 11:47 am Title: Mending Hearts

i never thought whe was dying. i really want to see where you take this


Author's Response: Well, I had really closed myself into a corner...all for this. Hopefully the way out will work out the same if not better.

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 10:46 am Title: Mending Hearts

see, i knew they wouldnt have split up permantly becuase of Ororo's view of life and how you should never kill! i knew there had to be somthing else!

great tory, i'm really hopping for a happy ending!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Am working on the next chapter right now. As for a happy ending.....not quite sure how happy it will be.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:46 am Title: Mending Hearts

Perfect. Finally, some closure for Ororo and Jubes. Want to see if you ever resolve things between 'Ro and Kendall, now. It's been hard seeing the daughter that is practically her spitting image hating her guts.

Great ending. Give Logan that male point of view that you're so good at and some of those equally memorable lines.

Author's Response: I want to tie up all loose ends, (or atleast try to). Revealing Ororo's 'truth' was one, her 'thing' with Scott the other, and now this one had the whole triumverate of Rogue, Remy and Jubilee. Don't have anything planned yet for Kendall...and as for Logan, you have really put me in a 'position' there. Hope it reactions also are acceptable to you. ;)

Reviewer: malefiscen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 11:55 pm Title: Fated to lose

oh thank god scott and ro aren't serious! it's just a rouse-doing happy dance:)

Author's Response: Well, I did say that Scott wouldnt't be the 'bad guy' here, and him marrying or having any sort of romance with Ororo would make him just that (in my book).

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 02:28 pm Title: Fated to lose

Okay now, this is new. Ororo wants Logan to move on with his life? I missed something; is something happening to Ororo? Clarify, please! She's worrying me!!!

Author's Response: You should read the last chapter (and also the hints I've been dropping in the previous ones). Also, this chapter isn't in current time, but a few months before now....before all this goes down.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 06:47 pm Title: Eyes of a Cajun

I take it Ro's either gonna die or it's something different altogether. Whatever it is, why didn't she tell Logan? Why all this mumbo jumbo with Scott, the divorce, keeping Logan from seeing his kids etc.? There must be more to it, 'cause I don't understand a thing right now. The reasons behind her behaviour. Why not just talk to Logan but huring him and the kids instead? Is she trying to make Logan hate her? Well, she should have given it a bit more thought then because the kids are hurting even more... Whatever it is, I'm so sorry for the kids right now because of everything that's been forced upon them.
I'm almost afraid to ask but what are the chances for a happy ending here? Just checkin' ;)

Author's Response: I am sorry for the kids too. Then again, it wasn't like it was given that Logan would give up on them. As for a happy ending, I have five possible endings in my mind right now, don't know which one of them will I be using finally....or whether it will be something totally different.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 03:15 pm Title: Eyes of a Cajun

Wow...so this is what has been going on? Shes' about to die, so this isn't about what Wolverine did but about her future death?! That's kind of disappointing, since I wanted Wolverine's vigilante/loner attitude to up for debate.
But my quesiton now is why did she go to such an extreme length of being with Scott if she's going to die? Did she feel if Wolverine hated her, it won't hurt as much leaving him with the children? I think that's rather selfish of 'Ro.

Now as for bringing Remy this is great, I could hav sworn that it was Rogue calling Remy but it's cool that it was Storm. Since I know that Rogue/Jubilee and even Kendall have a resentment towards Storm because of this situation and definitely no knowledge of Storm's condition since their sided with Wolverine in all this.

I really can't wait for this, by bringing in this issue you've turned the tables a little and it's very refereshing to read this chapter. Remy's history meeting and obviously the deep connection they share is clearly apparent in this chapter so it's definitely a fave.

I wonder where all this subterfuge is going to take them.

VB

Author's Response: It was Rogue calling Remy (after all Ororo was with Scott at that time). As for Remy's history with the X-Men, didn't want to use the same thief-meet-thief story. Decided to give it a little twist.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 07:26 am Title: Eyes of a Cajun

wow... i am so lost, i never know whats going on in this fic. who's wedding was that?

Author's Response: It is clear whose wedding it is, both in the title of the chapter and by the name mentioned in that scene. Its all Remy.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-06 - 12:46 am Title: Making the Call

I am really curious as to where this is going. Hope you update SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: Its all coming together, and will be revealed soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 12:41 pm Title: Making the Call

... I still could use some answers, you know ;)
Nearly everybody seems to know the big secret noone told Logan about, the big secret that would have made him stay... Gah!
You love it, right? Teasing us like this? Not funny *pouts* So not funny...
Hopefully with Remy's arrival there're gonna be some answers :)

Author's Response: The secret will be out soon, but not before some more arguing...well, atleast from one side.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 02:48 am Title: Making the Call

i find it hard to belive that logan wouldnt give kendall a way to contact him dont seem quite right and while we are on the subject of logan where in the hell is he i dont give a damn if storm and xavier are being asses it doesnt make sence for him to tuck tail and run and can someone plz kick storms ass at first she was real bitchy now shes kinda soft i know im hard to plz but you wanted reviews right? anyway keep up good work

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews and please do keep 'em coming. Regarding Storm, she is in for even more of a 'hearing' come next chapter.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 02:24 am Title: Making the Call

What the hell?! Who's blocking the calls in the house?! Whta's going on? Did Wolvie do it or Cyke? I'm lost. And why is Rogue calling Rem back...can he find Wolvie...what in gods name is going on?!

By he way if Ro must go through further pain...kill her.

Author's Response: As for the calls, remember Logan gave Xavier the cellphone back. The calls are going there. Regarding Rogue n' Remy, someone is needed to haul the collective asses of all these people from the funk they are in. An' killing 'Ro. Not. An. Option....not yet anyway. Where would be the fun in that. Let Logan get his kicks in too.

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