best story you've ever written!! This is SO heartbreaking.. :'(

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that the readers are liking this story....inspite of its mood.

I have finally posted. What is Logan doing now? You do realize this is what annoys me about the character. I understand that this 'running away' is inherent in his make up, but it botheres me. I again also understand that he has waited months to try to get things done.

You're succesful in making me dislike both the characteres....not just Wolverine any more. So that's a plus. Storm has lost everything and that's because she went way to far in this punishment of hers. But then I still see that Wolverine was an ass to dismiss her feelings and her position which is something that also hurt me as a woman and a possible mother. As though I can't feel pain, but I don't have the luxury of killing my child's attackers.

Anyway great new chapter and i want to know where Wolverine went.

I love Matt and the mention of Lucas!
Welcome back to your writing.

VB

Author's Response: Well, it wasn't exactly my intention to make the readers hate the character (either or both), but hey, I am not one to complain. Logan's reaction of 'running away' I took from what a wild animal does when it is turned out from the pack.....and that too after being in the leader (alpha) position. Regarding Storm, I agree that she has been a bit harsh....ok, too harsh. But there is a reason for that too, one that will revealed soon. As for the question of Wolverine (not Logan's) disregarding of her feelings, I took it the same way as a trauma survior might react to someone using the words 'I know how you feel'. One can imagine but never truly know it, not without experiencing it. What Wolverine saw was that what had been done to him....and would be done to his daughter....if he did not stop the people responsible. Logan's whereabouts will also come out soon, mostly probably in the next chapter itself. And as for Matt and Lucas, seeing that this is a movieverse fic, I tried to keep the references to the movies only (Daredevil and Spider-Man 1,2) The other mentions and hints (Cecelia Reyes, Northstar n' sister Aurora and Bishop), they were just to give some depth to this 'universe'.

Logan gone, Ro all in tears, both hurting so much... and what is it the Professor knows? This "everything" thingy he was contemplating telling Logan about but decided against because of the promise he gave Ro.
Damn, I need to know! Do you plan on revealing it anytime soon? :)

Author's Response: You are so hot in ur guess that you are practically setting the story ablaze. As for the revelation....there have been coming out on a regular basis. Ororo n' Scott, Kendall's Power Surge, Logan's moving away, Ororo's....oops, almost gave it out. But not yet.

thats so sad... :( does that mean that logan doesnt meet up with kendall,james, jubilee, or marie anymore since he's severed all ties or does he see them for 52 days in the year??
gd luck with next chapter


Author's Response: Well, Logan (in conjunction with his Lawyer) wants to have all the time in a lump-sum. There is a reason for this...coming soon.

Ohhh, Kendall slipping into berserker mode... now that could cause some damage I guess, heh. Maybe that's what Logan has been training her? To control the rage, keep it in check...
And what the hell is the big secret? Everything fell into place!? Yeah, right... I'm sitting here completely clueless, wanting to know what Charles knows! Damn! Spill it! ;) LOL
Matt Murdock, huh? Now things get even more interesting. Or should I say confusing? Argh, I need some answers! Like, now :D
... feral windrider... that's so cute :)

Author's Response: Sorry if my fics have been confusing....hmm, you know what, no to the 'sorry'. ;) I wanted the readers to get confused and try and make up possible situations both in this fic and in x-ed. As for Charles and Matt, both will be there in the next chapter, along with Logan and of course, Ororo. As for the feral Windrider, that just came out of the blue.

i am loving the kendall/logan connection daddy and daughter are great together. i do not like ro in this she is acting too bitchy.

Author's Response: Bitchy!! Hey, that got left behind quite some time back. Now, she is just confused.

"let's get ready to rrrumble!!!!!!!!!!' CUSTODY BATTLE??!! i'm so there.

Author's Response: Hmm. I didn't quite think of that, but now..... More in the next update!!

Damnit to hell 2 and half shockers in one fic...crazy man!! I loved this chapter..so far the best to throw in 2 1/2 shockers..wow!!

Well let's go throughthe list if your wondering....

We find out about the extent of Kendall's mutation which is frightening and great. I was so with 'Ro when she got worried about Kendall and the Berserker rage. If Kendall gets real pissed off and loses control the world would then just implode on it'self....crazy stuff that going on. And we know how bad Wolverine gets where he's nutty for years not just months.....Kendall would definitely mess up the planet....great dyanmic twist to her power setting. loved it.

Then we have Matt Murdock, holy shit. So what? Wolverine wants custody I guess. And that's crazy 'Ro is gonna go ballistic and anyway with this new developmemnt I think that 'Ro, Logan, kendall and their son need to go away to a cabin to reacquaint on many levels. as it can be clearly seen that Kendall needs her dad more than ever and just to give 'Ro some piece of mind.

Mind you that both 'Ro and Logan are out of control in this fic and both are in the wrong. And this new development is gonna cause some serious drama.

Now on to the half I was talking about. Well that's to do with Scott's statement to Xavier...what the hell is the secret. Obviously we know something is not as they seem and I'm starting to wonder if Scott even really proposed to Storm , or if Storm was with Scott for someone else.

What is such a secret since what their doing is something that Wolverine is out of the loop about, and why is Storm going on with this, if she is not really going with Scott but letting Wolverine think otherwise.

And if she's going with Scott the question again is raised as to why since we can obviously tell there's a whole different dynamic to the whole situation.

VB

Author's Response: You know, I was really worried about this chapter in the way that there wasn't any actual RoLo in it, but you proved me wrong. More on all your questions soon...a hint, its not gonna be happy...including the Logan-Ororo-Scott dynamic. BW