Kendall floating in the air, elitricity dancing all around her... That really must look adorable :)
So Logan has been training/preparing Kendall... I really would like to read a flashback about that. I love him with his kids :) ...
He should have talked to Ro about it. I understand her reaction. But then again, maybe he tried but she refused to talk and avoided him at all costs instead. And stubborn as he can be he just stopped trying. If you get hurt you tend to be stubborn, keeping things to yourself, especially big important ones. So I can understand him in his actions, too.
Still don't know what to make of Scott and Ro. Hope to find out more on that soon... but not too detailed please ;) I don't like that couple at all, heh. Still rooting and hoping for RoLo here.

Author's Response: Will see if I can get more of Logan and the kids time together. As for talking to 'Ro, even Ororo understood (in a way) that she has been avoiding Logan...almost like the plague. As for Scott's part in all this....just a hint, don't judge him from the way I have depicted him in my other fics.

damn it...I have to review again and i can't remember a word I said in the last review.

Well I like this fic, and definitely this chapter. I hope to finally see a mother and daughter bonding moment between Storm and Kendall....one similar to the one you have in X-Verse....or just see them riding the winds together..that woudl be great. They'd be an excellent tagteam.

I have to ask where in cookies name is Wolverine? I'm not to happy about his disappaearing act and if he disappears it's gonna look like he ran away and I'm gonna want to smack him again.

I'm not too upset with 'Ro, I see why she was offended that she wasn't informed. Wolverine is extremely high handed in his approach and as she is Kendall's mum she should have been fully involved as she stated. So I don't fault her for being angry...I would too.

Now surprisingly enough I'm really shocked that I'll be asking where is Scott? I'm not a fan of his in the this book he's alloweing himself to be part of of this farce..if it was Storm's idea, if it's his own Storm really doesn't need to be running second fiddle.

And I'm wanting to know where Kendall's brother is and if he has any powers?! He seemed a bit scared by what's happened..and that interested me. He's a sweet heart.

VB

Author's Response: Although I hope to have more Ororo-Kendall, I am not sure if it will be like the one in X-verse. However, (I think), the worse b/w both of them is over....for now. As for Wolverine. He's gotta run doesn't he. Wouldn't you if you were in his place. With Storm making her choice clear to him...what do you expect? As for informing about Kendall's changes, things haven't been all that co-ordial b/w 'Ro n' him. Scott. See, he is the surprise of this story. I have him used him sparingly, but still he is able to make himself know....i.e. he is always there in the background. James. Well, he is human for now. I have a couple of ideas about possible powers for him and when (or whether) to show them. More updates soon!!

i cant wait to know what she did

Author's Response: Well, even though I didn't mention it, it was pretty clear what she did...or what happened to her. However, it is stated clearly in the latest update I just posted.

Ok, I must apologize about my commets made
about Kendell, begin a spoll brat. This part changes
my way of thinking. The child is hurt. She see's her
mom in ch7 hurting her father, I had to reread. Without
her giving a damn to see if he was ok or acknowledged
her shock that she went through at that time. Kendell
has hope that if they went to go stay with Logan maybe
things will change and be the other way around, as she said he would't make you leave. As she kicked
him out. I don't know it's hard for me to explain. I
understand where she's coming from really. I went
through the same thing with my parents begin a daddy's girl. Ok nuff of my personal mess. Great
story!! Keep it coming. Update when you can Dark D.

Author's Response: Thank you. First it was Ororo that the readers were hating on, and then Kendall. Glad to see that is taken care off. As for the character of a child of a divorced couple, I tried to do my best at making it organic and set in RL. Just posted next update.

thak you lord he is alive! I like this story and i really want them to get together already! i am really glad that you have updated after so long. i am still uncomfortable with how cold ororo comes off towards logan in this story and how she seems so unwilling to realize that he really loves her and wants to put their family back together. it may not be my favorite portayral of these two but it still makes for a really good read.

Author's Response: Thanks. I understand that (HC) Storm fans might have a problem with my depiction here...especially in the first few chapters. But you gotta agree things are improving now as we reveal more layers and expand on the plot.

What were Ro, Henry, and Scott talking (or not talking) about in the medlab? What did she mean by "as long as I can"? Is there something wrong with Ro? What's going on? I'm lost...
And poor Kendall! She seriously expected her mom to send her away :( Okay, she would love to be with her daddy again but believing her mom sends away everyone who does something wrong is pretty bad.
Where's Logan? Did he notice the freaky weather? Or is he too far away already (he better not be!). He should know that something is not quite right.
I'm looking forward for more! I have no idea where you are going with this, heh :)


Good to have you back writing again!
Hope you are all settled in at your new place :)

Author's Response: You are the first one to ask this question...and to get me really thinking about the possibilities from this 'slip up'. As for Kendall, I am glad that the readers' opinion about her has changed (as it did with Storm). Logan. Drunk. Bed. That should answer your query about Logan's whereabouts during all this. Just posted next chapter.

hmmmm...now where are you going with this fic? So we now know that Kendall has her powers. Which is wicked...I wonder the magnitude of them. Is 'Ro going to inform Wolverine of the change? Where did Wolverine go? And let me tell you, he better not have run away...I really can't tolerate a man who keeps running from the problems than confronting it.

Now also I hae a question about the ending, 'Ro didn't seem adverse to the advice of 'daddy' wolverine coming back. What is that meaning to the story? Are we sensingn some kind of forgiveness developing? Will they go back to Wolverine, will he be there? and if he's not, what will that do to them. adn then there's Scott.....not welcom personally. I dont' know why you did that to me and have THEM get togeher it's almost as bad as her and BP.

Can't wait for more.

VB

Author's Response: Questions. Questions. Questions. You really know how to ask 'em. Well, as for the extent (and history) of Kendall's powers, more on them in the latest update I just posted. Same with 'Ro informing Logan. Where did he go? More on that soon. As for the ending, well, I just couldn't go and set a couple could I? There is forgiveness, there is repentence....and there are secrets. All in good time. Scott. Well, unlike in my other fics, he ain't the bad guy here. Then again, I did say the same with 'Cleansing' too.