[Report This]Date: 06-27-14 - 04:53 am Title: Prologue
Please update!!! Loved it!! Congrats
[Report This]Date: 06-20-06 - 05:38 am Title: All and Sundry
Very nice. Continue, please.
[Report This]Date: 05-15-06 - 09:54 am Title: All and Sundry
I really enjoyed this chapter. Loved Peter and Kitty! And I'm glad to see Henry like this. Accepting the situation as it is, not fighting against it any longer. Moving on. Loved that it was him of all people to tell Ro to go after the man she loves, heh. Hope she'll do just that.
And where's Logan heading to now? Home I hope... back to her. I dare him to go to someone else now! :)
[Report This]Date: 04-30-06 - 07:16 pm Title: All and Sundry
Hi,
I have been reading many of your stories. I love the way you write. The characters seem so real. I liked this story and this particular chapter. I hope that you finished your papers and exams. And I hope that you liked Seattle (that is where I live, by the way). But what I REALLY hope is that you are planning to do an update or two REALL SOOOOOON!....Please. I agree with the previous review...a knock down, drag out fight between Ororo and Logan and FANTASTIC makeup sex would be worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: 03-19-06 - 11:55 pm Title: All and Sundry
All right, you've hooked me. I enjoyed this. I like that all of the characters grew up a little over the course of the story. I also liked that Beast seems to have realized why he and Ororo couldn't have worked out together, it was a nice touch.
PLEASE add another chapter. I'm dying to see how it ends. Personally, I'd love a knock-down, drag-out argument between Logan and Ororo, followed by earth-shattering makeup sex. But that's just me.
Cee
Author's Response: thanks for the review cee! i'm glad you liked it and another chapter is in the works! "knock-down, drag-out argument?" absolutely. "makeup sex?" well thats contingent on them actually making up, isn't it? :D
[Report This]Date: 03-01-06 - 11:27 am Title: All and Sundry
So, uhm, me again. Read this again, and well, where the F*@k is my update dammit. **grumbles** Hurry up, I'm jonsing.
Author's Response: well, hullo there. i got some bad news for ya...i've got 4 papers due and 3 exams to take over the next week...and then i'm flying west (seattle!) for sb2k6...i'll see what i can do, but it might take a while. ...please don't beat me! ::scampers off::
[Report This]Date: 02-28-06 - 12:56 pm Title: All and Sundry
that one person to help him better be who i think it is and not some warped twist to the story!!!
Author's Response: actually, i was thinking it could be longshot. how's that for a twist? ... all right, now i have to spend the next couple months getting THAT image out of my head...
[Report This]Date: 02-28-06 - 05:46 am Title: All and Sundry
Oh, hey! Went back and actually (re)went over the previous chapters....again. Is it just me or did you start off with the Ultimate Universe in mind, but now it comes more across as maintime MU? Anyways, whatever the universe, I've got this fic on fav. alert and whooped for joy at finally getting more than an 'updated' update!!
Lookin' forward for more.
PS: Ororo calls Peter...'Younger' brother!!
Author's Response: it's sort of an amalgam of the various universes. i took things that i loved from both and combined them in a way that, i hope, makes sense. and because of that, ro is allowed to call peter little brother :D (plus, i think it's cuter in a sort of ironic way). i'm taking it you approve of the story as a whole though, so thanks for the review and support!!
[Report This]Date: 02-28-06 - 01:54 am Title: All and Sundry
If I have to wait a year again, I just may beat you severely about the head and shoulders. This chapter was marvelous!! I mean that. I felt connected to each character, like they all had a real POV to the story, and with each other. It felt familial and true to life. The descriptions, simple and not overly done really helped set the tone. **applading wildly**
Now....where exactly is Logan going? Is that gorgeous, sexy hunk of adamantium lovin' going to claim his woman? (Please?)
I need another update, darlin' and I need it fast.
Ps. I really do love you. You're one of the very best friends I have ever had. Not reviewing, just saying.
~Hol out. :P
Author's Response: ::blushes profuseling:: oh geez, hol. make me cry a little, all right? as for logan...well...i can't say too much there. eh, who am i kidding, you know me... also, i can't imagine it would take me another year. granted, i didn't think THIS would take me a year...but don't beat me up! i'm not sure i could take that kind of hurt. i love you, too!!
[Report This]Date: 02-23-06 - 08:52 am Title: Playin' the Fool
Is it just me...or did you lose a chapter b/w the first posting and this revision!!
Anyways, you know you really are a tease...I waited so long and once again got stranded at the same point in time.
Stop yanking my chain and get on with the updates...Pleeeeaaaasse!!
Author's Response: i combined chapters, but all the contents still there. i think. it should be, atleast. and me? a tease? never...unfortunately, writing takes a back seat to real life. but i promise an update is in the works! very very soon.
[Report This]Date: 02-22-06 - 07:18 am Title: Playin' the Fool
Just read through this all at once... even though I should be working right now. Well, I couldn't stop, heh :D
This is really good! Can't wait for the next update!
So he's running again instead of fighting? I understand he doesn't want to force her into something she doesn't seem to want in his eyes but... Can't he sense her love for him? Can't he smell it? And what's with Ro? She should go after him to clear up this misunderstanding. She loves him, right? She should fight! Talk some sense into him...
Author's Response: i'm not sure logan sees what he's doing as running. yet. ahem. i think when it comes to love, all our other senses go out the window, and that includes logan. now, that said, maybe he just needs to wise up a little bit? and as for ro? well, you're right on that one -- she's not one to take things lying down. this story isn't over yet, and updates are definately on their way! i'm glad you like it so far and i hope you'll enjoy the rest!! thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02-21-06 - 08:05 pm Title: Can't Stop What's Coming
Oh man! Now i got to go allllll the way to the beginning to figure out what i just read. that was Action -packed that's for sure!
update again, reaaaaaaaaaal soon this time Charmer!!! *stern look*
Author's Response: ::sheepishly:: yes ma'am. an update is forthcoming (for real this time...i promise). but, uh...speaking of updates? ahem?
[Report This]Date: 02-21-06 - 04:03 am Title: Playin' the Fool
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR> You can NOT stop there. He's LEAVING?? Y'know, the more I wanna open my RoLo loving heart up the more I'm given reasons not too. Give me a reason to believe again, Charmer. **bats eyes**
Author's Response: lol. no! you have to BELIEVE! as you well know, i'm working hard to restore your faith! you know me, happy endings and all that jazz... ;)
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