[Report This]Date: 10-28-12 - 01:57 am Title: The End.
Wow what an emotional roller coaster! And I loved every minute! At times I wasn't sure these two were ever going to get together they were both so maddeningly stubborn. The end was absolutely beautiful! I can't wait for your next story.
[Report This]Date: 10-26-12 - 05:58 pm Title: Ororo's leaving
Awwh I'm hurting for both of them.
[Report This]Date: 10-26-12 - 04:43 pm Title: Who's the father?
Wow! I would never know Ororo to be so callous to a friend, but I'm going to chalk it up to hormones...
Date: 10-14-12 - 01:48 am Title: The End.
Hi Sally Po. This has been one of my favorite stories from the very first start of my reading it. Read this last chapter days ago, just didn't have a chance to review after reading it sorry. You have got a fantastic grasp on story telling and I am glad you came back to finish this after your hiatus. I have thoroughly been drawn into this fic with every chapter, loving every moment and way that you portrayed each character. Only one wish would be that the end would have not felt a little rushed. Made me feel like it was just being put to and end, even though I loved our couple being together as a family with Kitty and Jonathan and the new baby on the way. Would have loved to read more on this. Not a harsh thing at all, still loved your work and look forward to reading more from you. A fan A A
[Report This]Date: 09-17-12 - 04:38 am Title: The Wedding
I just wanted to this that this chapter was good and I was glad that you updated. I was a little surprise about Logan's answer but I understand where he's coming from. Also, Storm hasn't told Jonathan tht Logan is his father yet. But I can wait to see how that will pan out. Anyway great chapter update soon.
[Report This]Date: 09-17-12 - 04:22 am Title: The Wedding
Oh please update soooon! That preview when she asked and he said no I was like did he just slam the door on their relationship?
I understand why Logan is angry and yes he should be kinda cold towards 'Ro but now I think it's time for some healing to begin. It's time to put the past behind them and start fresh. I don't think marriage is the answer right now but they should go out and get to know each other as family first then get married.
Date: 08-28-12 - 10:38 pm Title: No title yet
Oh my gosh, I read this story sooo long ago and I had to go back and reread it to fully enjoy it till now. It was immediately one that I couldn't help but to love then and now. Your story telling is amazing. All the gush said, now...I am mad it took so long to give us this amazing update...lol.., I did have to go over a few sentences a couple of times to get it due to minor grammatical or spelling errors, but that did not hinder me from loving this wonderful piece work. Thank you, A A
Date: 08-28-12 - 04:44 pm Title: No title yet
Ok yes! She finally tells Logan. I was really gettiing upset with Ororo in this story because she was being so unfair with Logan from the beginning. She didn't even give him a chance. I hope now that seeing Logan with Jonathan and the horrible accident will finally make her remove the blinders and let her and Logan start to make up so some lost time.
[Report This]Date: 08-27-12 - 06:12 pm Title: No title yet
Love this, please post soon!
[Report This]Date: 07-21-09 - 07:24 pm Title: Unexpected discovery
I have really enjoyed this story, please tell me you are going to continue it?
[Report This]Date: 05-20-08 - 03:16 pm Title: New beginigs?
Wonderful update, can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
[Report This]Date: 05-18-08 - 12:49 pm Title: New beginigs?
This story is really starting to develop. Also, I like Logan as a dad.
As someone who walked in her parents hopefully "making-out" in the pool, that scene at the lake was believeable.
'Ro should not get off easy. Logan does care about her and will likely forgive her, but she LIED to him for over 3 years. 'Ro should have to redeem herself with him.
[Report This]Date: 05-17-08 - 06:21 pm Title: New beginigs?
OMG! This was a really good chapter. I hate that poor little Johnathan had to get hurt, but its about time that Logan knows that he is his son. Update soon!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05-17-08 - 06:21 pm Title: New beginigs?
OMG! This was a really good chapter. I hate that poor little Johnathan had to get hurt, but its about time that Logan knows that he is his son. Update soon!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01-24-08 - 05:32 am Title: Unexpected discovery
must finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! perfect
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