Date: 07-06-06 - 09:49 pm Title: Swift change of events
ohhh wonder what's going to happen next I love it very good
Date: 07-06-06 - 06:40 pm Title: Swift change of events
was this a dream sequence?
Date: 07-06-06 - 04:34 pm Title: Swift change of events
Swift change of events? I'm thinking swift change of plot! (and I'm not saying that in a mean way, I promise) What happened to these being teenagers at a school? Suddenly Ororo's naked and Logan's cussing like a sailor. The chapter itself is good, but it's definitely at odds with the first three (or at least doesn't pick up the same thread). I enjoyed this bit of the story, but I'm curious as to what will come next. I'm very interested to see you write more, Mimz.
Author's Response: Sorry I changed the plot, I wanted them to appear different from other students, that they are older than they actually are-they grew up faster, eg a dog is 2 in human years but 14 in dog years. again i'm very sorry. But Ororo is usually naked when getting in touch with nature and Logan is always swearing.