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Reviewer: Anonymous. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-06 - 10:05 pm Title: Mind control

I'm confused.

Author's Response: The sections of this chapter with Ororo are set in the back of her mind, where she or someone else is creating the perfect dream world, by skipping from one place to the next. The other sections are Hank and Charles, and how they are finding a way to help her. Hope this clears it up for you a bit. The next chapter hopefully wont be so confusing.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-06 - 12:53 pm Title: Mind control

Ok, I am confused. ??? What exactly is happening? You have potential for an interesting story (definitely not a round robin) but I am lost in translation somewhere. Help.

Author's Response: Ororo's trapped in her own mind, and is jumping from one dream or fantasy to the next, in order to find the one she prefers, so that she'll stay in unconsciousness/coma. Her own doing or another mutant? havent decided yet.

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