Interesting beginning. I like the part about the microbrew! Especially since where I live has its own microbrewery. There is a spot where your spell check changed a "darlin'" to "darling" that could be fixed, and there's funny verb usage with "seep" (the warmth can "seep out of her body into the wall," but the wall would not necessarily "seep the warmth out of her body", the wall would "drain the warmth out of her body).

But yeah, other than that, this is a fantastic piece. Hope my wordy review doesn't annoy you...keep updating. This is good stuff.