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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 01:13 am Title: The beggining
Date: 07-30-06 - 01:13 am Title: The beggining
Not bad. Not bad at all. Gotta work on the spellings and some punctuation, but this was a great story because it was creative, had a great original character, and made good use of the entire cast, everyone got some relevant dialogue.
This sentence was one of my favorites:
“Hecka good. How do you think it felt?”
Get back to work! Write us some more stories!!!
CeeCee ;-)
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