Date: 04-25-15 - 01:21 pm Title: Thin Air
Pls continue and update. This is a great story.
Date: 01-05-12 - 10:42 am Title: Perchance to Dream…
I really hope you come back and finish this. I just finished the first story to this one, and I must say that I loved it. I hate reading stories that are not finished, but I'll read what is left of this one just to get an idea of what's to come.
[Report This]Date: 03-22-07 - 11:36 pm Title: Thin Air
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon .
[Report This]Date: 02-08-07 - 12:18 pm Title: Thin Air
whats up man when can we expect an update?
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 11:31 pm Title: On Strike
Okay....I'm completely in love with this story. I hope you update...soon. ; )
[Report This]Date: 11-12-06 - 09:33 pm Title: On Strike
Wow. Poor Logan. This has to be confusing and goodness knows Remy is trying to help but shesh! Is he more than a bit overprotective or what? I am so releived that Storm didn't go further with Forge so she can put all of her attention on getting Logan back to normal (as she heals up). Good chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 11-09-06 - 04:23 am Title: On Strike
Darn that Gambit...grrrr. I vote we fill the pockets of his trenchcoat, tie him up and toss him into the lake behind the X-mansion. (he's just not my favorite, and he interrupted that nice little RoLo bonding session) Still laughing about his reaction to Storm clinging to Logan.
All right. The muses are back on the job. This is a good thing.
[Report This]Date: 11-08-06 - 01:40 pm Title: On Strike
great update was kinda disappointed that there was alittle more anger from storm but great update
[Report This]Date: 10-31-06 - 11:51 am Title: Action-Reaction
really good chapter like the changes hate the cliffhanger but cant do much about that. cant wait to see storm go crazy on scott
Author's Response: Finally updated and no cliffy this time around.
[Report This]Date: 10-31-06 - 03:00 am Title: Action-Reaction
HELLO?!? CONTINUE?? dam tis awesome.
Author's Response: Updated. :D
[Report This]Date: 09-28-06 - 03:25 am Title: Action-Reaction
It's good that you are redoing this fic because i quite like the other one and if your improving i know I like this one too. so please hurry and update.
Oh and maybe if you finish this one you could do like a prequel to show how Ororo and Logan got together and etc.
[Report This]Date: 09-08-06 - 12:52 am Title: Action-Reaction
Change chest fluffing to chest puffing, it works better in the context of that line. It was a great line, by the way.
Some fixes needed in this paragraph, then I'll quit nickpicking:
“Its not on you,” the snow haired Ororo protested. “Well, not exactly. I mean it is on you, but its only one claw. It’s not like I put anything on your face. Besides, its not shi…poop, it’s nail-polish, and the best that is.” She waved the two bottles she had used to beatify the front quarter of a single bone claw, taking great pains to use the natural ridges and curves to make a rather interesting design.
"Beautify" needs a u. "Best that is" needs to be "best there is." "Its only one claw" needs to be "it's only one claw."
Right. I'll quit bellyaching. Good update. I could visualize the talk about the razors, since it felt like it came straight out of my own home. (my husband uses up my razors to shave his head)
Author's Response: Corrected. As for the 'razor/hair-removal' comments (both here in TDA), they came from pure TV/Video/Reading experience...as I don't use one. :p
[Report This]Date: 08-19-06 - 05:59 pm Title: Get to it already
Can't wait to read the next chapter. You've got a great story going here!
[Report This]Date: 08-18-06 - 02:08 am Title: Get to it already
there ya go, writing another story that you had BETTER update, you, or...I'm sending Logan over to your house to christen the curtains.
Seriously, this was a cool chapter. Logan's fun when he's bloodthirsty. Can't wait to see the exchange between him and Ororo.
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