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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-30-06 - 06:59 am Title: Wisp of smoke

I'm not a fan of OC's though I love the way she talks. I like the imagery as well and I really, really love the title. It's the title that kept pulling me back to this story as I browsed through the recent stories. That said I'm so far behind in my reading that I may not be able to finish this any time soon but I just had to let you know how much I like the title not to mention the last line.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-03-06 - 03:20 am Title: Wisp of smoke

Neat beginning. Neat character. Watch the punctuation. Good verb usage. I like the visual that I get from this prose. Good work, kid.

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