Question, Is this being translated from another language? I am enjoying the story though it is a bit hard to follow at times, seems to be in 1st & 3rd persons, and all the tenses; past, present, and future *You have to stick with one tense throughout*. It a good story but I'd recommend getting a beta, to make it fantastic :)

Author's Response: Yes, it was translated from another language. From Russian. I'm trying to improve my English, bit it is so hard sometimes... Thank you for your reviews, Pari :)