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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 08:35 pm Title: Lunchtime

I knew Logan had to hear it all! I wondered why he didn't say anything about his enhanced five sense.

Reviewer: ilovetornado_phoenix4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-06 - 05:52 pm Title: Lunchtime

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!! IT IS SUCH A GOOD STORY FOR TWO CHAPTERS!! WILL LOGAN AND ORORO START DATING???

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-06 - 05:32 pm Title: Lunchtime

interresting sounds like remy and logan might butt heads with each other over storm would be very interrested in seeing that

Author's Response: Your wish my command, I had already half written part of this chapter and when I saw your review I knew I was on the right track. Thanks ~Jordan

Reviewer: Roxxibebe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-15-06 - 01:55 am Title: Lunchtime

( Referring to your response ) Don’t worry about the jumpyness….is that even a word? Lol.
I’m not a great author, either. In everything its takes awhile to get things that way you want it. And your right, you just needed time to find a good pace.

( Referring now to your new second chapter ) - I love quotes, I use quotes for my papers all that time. For me it takes me forever to find the perfect one….but lets talk about you.
I was getting into it and then it ended L

I like this story, I think your doing a great job, don’t worry too much and do what you gotta do…
Update...Soon?
-Roxxi : )

Author's Response: Soon = once I'm done adding responses to the reveiws. Thanks so much for reviewing all my chapters It's so good to have support for a story. Thanks ~Jordan

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