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Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-08-09 - 02:05 am Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

Great start, the formatting is a bit wonky, needs to be spaced out a bit. I loved the beginning, the dream sequences was good, however the ending left something to be desired. It felt rushed and Logan seemed out of character the way he just suddenly agreed to stay. Frankly it felt like Storm was having a conversation with Scott instead of Logan. A little more resistance from Logan, having him battle with leaving more, and thinking on staying would have been more like something Logan would do. But nonetheless it's a great start and I will continue reading it, and giving my feedback

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-01-07 - 02:56 am Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

Bringing Charles into Logan's dream was a unique angle, since we saw Logan being pretty broken up about him being killed in that scene (which is one of my favorites). I love the title of this story, and it drew my attention easily to want to read it. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: I felt that was the most emotional scene in the whole movie. You can thank Sugarland for the title. One of my favorite songs and it was while listening to it I came up with the ide of the story.

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-01-07 - 01:37 am Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

One word.... Nice. I can't wait to see what happens to these two.

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 11:27 pm Title: Prologue~ Just Stay

Oooo scarry and sad dream for Logan, he's always tormented. Nice beginning here and you are keeping the characters true to form. Good job.

Rolletti

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