I like this story, but I noticed it's been a while since you updated, so I had to go back and reread some of the previous chapters.

This is easy to read, the sentences aren't loaded with too much description or interruptions in thought. Logan seems like a good listener in this story, which is nice, since Ororo is so frequently his sounding board.

Author's Response: I thought it was time to make Logan sit down and listen. I'm glad you enjoy it.