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Reviewer: bringirl2001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-09 - 03:47 am Title: See You In My Dreams

this is another good chapter i am so glad you update write more soon please

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Date: 12-30-08 - 10:37 am Title: See You In My Dreams

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-08 - 03:05 am Title: See You In My Dreams

i love thisss shelle!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like. Working on it right now.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-08 - 02:13 am Title: See You In My Dreams

The first paragraph was really long, a lot of ideas crammed into one block of text. it would be easier to read that section if you just added paragraph breaks. Other than that, this is a good transition to your story. We seemed to step into Logan's nightmare without much warning, which is good. Poor guy.

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I agree with you. I'll try to work on that. I have always wondered how he would handle everyones death and this is how I feel it would happen.

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