Reviews For You Just Might Make Me Believe
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Reviewer: bringirl2001 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01-01-09 - 03:47 am Title: See You In My Dreams
Date: 01-01-09 - 03:47 am Title: See You In My Dreams
this is another good chapter i am so glad you update write more soon please
Reviewer: orororo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-30-08 - 03:05 am Title: See You In My Dreams
Date: 12-30-08 - 03:05 am Title: See You In My Dreams
i love thisss shelle!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like. Working on it right now.
Reviewer: Cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-30-08 - 02:13 am Title: See You In My Dreams
Date: 12-30-08 - 02:13 am Title: See You In My Dreams
The first paragraph was really long, a lot of ideas crammed into one block of text. it would be easier to read that section if you just added paragraph breaks. Other than that, this is a good transition to your story. We seemed to step into Logan's nightmare without much warning, which is good. Poor guy.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I agree with you. I'll try to work on that.
I have always wondered how he would handle everyones death and this is how I feel it would happen.
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