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Reviewer: stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-07 - 08:47 pm Title: Who let the Tramp out?

assumtions are made her in the opening few moments.....how did she know Chuck was a telepath? By her word usage she is slightly ignorant and though she is of the streets she's not worldly. Very anime of you though when you introduced "tramp".
The man-wolf description reminded me of the whole parallel evolution theroy Black Panther told Logan about in Woverine. As for the gypsy decription.....thats a romantizied version of a Romani....believe me. Over all its getting better.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 12:09 am Title: Who let the Tramp out?

Tramp is an interesting character; interesting how he seems kind of feral and wolflike, like Sabertooth, and that Gypsy seems to have a trusting relationship with him (or does she?). I can't wait to see what kind of back story you write for how Gypsy came to be in the hands of Sabertooth, and who's payroll he is on, too.

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