The summary was funny! Just thought I would mention that.

it had a few spelling goofs that are easy to fix (like "threw" when you meant "through"). I like the take you have of Kitty, she's believable and likable, and the dialogues between your two main characters is once again very good.

The list of stores at the end was okay, but the last sentences there almost made it feel like you weren't done writing yet. One more beef: You switched tenses at about the time that Ororo was driving them to the mall, it became first person instead of third.

Anyway, if you want to wrangle a few more reviews, you might want to post a link to this story out on Yahoo Groups; join one if you haven't. Tiger has a nice one called written_stars. Lots of neat people who love RoLo.