I like the conversation between Forge and Logan, both sides of it. They both said what they had to say, and you made it believable. One thing I have to say about this story is that all the characters are very civilized, even when they're ticked off. You remind us that these characters have been brought up at a school, and they act like it. I also LOVE the visual of Ororo fluffing his pillow, that was cute. I could see it.