Okay, finally read this chapter and I’m going to tell you it made want to scream! But not because of the death mind you. Why oh why are you depicting Storm’s marriage with T’Challa so true to the comics? The only thing substaining me after witnessing the closeness of a wife and husband between these two is that you really do stick to the comics and of course this is the RoLo Realm, not the – what do fans of T’Challa and Ororo call them? TRo? Eww. I can’t believe I’m even going there. I miss the old Panther though. Oh well. So I really like how you have all the elements of the current Marvel events and I’m very curious to see where you’re taking Ro and Logan because the hints are so compelling. I also like how you described how Ororo kept him calm in the beginning and now that she’s gone he’s gotten more feral. That makes so much sense! I love that! Now, I may be mistaken but didn’t the O.N.E. book? As in leave? ;D

Author's Response: don't worry I am a true rolo'r this story will have several twists and turns. So as Stan Lee says stay tuned true believer

I love this. Logan and Chance are both a riot. Jagermeister...man, talk about hangover time. And I like Emma in this. Smug and sly as ever, but she has some great lines. Now, if Hudlin would write T'Challa like you do, then maybe I could tolerate that comic, but alas...

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll see what I can do about Hudlin lol :P