I’m going to have to start by saying some of the wording is different, perhaps a little awkward. I’m not saying that to be mean, Lord knows I’m not it just had to be said. I still have an image of Lenox holding onto an empty bag of skin or a doppelganger of some type as “he walked his naked form to the small closet” like an errant child or something. BUT that aside you captured my attention immediately. The premise has really intrigued me. It’s obvious there’s a connection between Logan and Lenox and I’m curious just what it is.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!