Very short chapter but what a wallop it packed! I thought it might be the other way around but I like this turn of events. You've put quite a twist on the old I'm your father - I mean son - routine and that's something.

I'm not going to say anything else after this but I would recommend getting a beta to help you out, maybe you can look for one on the forum? Oh, one last thing. There are a lot of stories that immediately turn me off when I see a ton of misspelled words and odd grammatical turns but for all my comments in my reviews for your story this isn't one of them.

What?! All I can say is DRAMA.

Pretty good story.

Whoa! Totally didn't see that coming. That was crazy. Suggestion though, while the story is good, it could do for some pacing and tighter dialouge. Just a suggestion!