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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-19-12 - 04:04 am Title: Ch4- truth

The premise of this story is very good and it is well written. I just can't get into the wording of some of Logans conversations. I have a hard time picturing him talking that way, but what do I know this is your story and I just enjoyed reading it still. A A

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-23-08 - 01:47 am Title: Ch4- truth

I hope I wasn't too critical for you because ultimately I'm enjoying this story a lot. Nice short chapters, great premise, fun predicament Ororo's in and yet doesn't know, what's not to like? I look forward to more.

Reviewer: vENomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-08 - 06:18 am Title: Ch4- truth

Oh Snap! This is so good. I can't believe that Wolverine is a da! :) What will happen when Ororo finds out? Please continue, it's like a soap opera.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-08 - 02:07 pm Title: Ch4- truth

I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

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