Date: 04-19-08 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter One
I don't know if I ever reviewed this.
I love Bobby. Bit wordy on his narrative; he explains himself a lot, but that's fine for a first chapter. And I LOVE Northstar, so I can't wait to see what you bring to the table between these two. Thing is, his frank talk of his love life almost overshadows the RoLo in this story, but what we saw of it was still good.
This was funny, easy to read and well written. More, please.
Author's Response: Just wanted to thank you for the review of my fic "Parallels". I appreciate it. I do promise RoLo in this fic, but it will develop slowly and there will be lots of other characters and pairings as well. But again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04-19-08 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter One
Hmmm... FOH in charge, Rouge keeping a supply of inhibitor collars, Jean being pregnant in a society that "forbids it", Bobby/Northstar, it all sounds intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens : )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!