I really don't miss the RoLo in this chapter because I'm enjoying the exchanges between Jean Paul and Bobby. It'd be cool if you'd post a story just with those two on a different site.

Good work tying in the Alpha Flight history in this fic. Jean Paul having an adopted daughter is one of those details that most readers don't remember or mention too often, that and Logan having a previous attraction to Heather. I'm enjoying the tone of this story, even though the pace of the action slowed down a bit over the past chapter or two. It's good to see them having decent down time, though. Jean Paul ducking in to get a tray and ducking right back out had me in chuckles.