Reviews For Ororo's Secret
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Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I really want to know what's going on! Logan was all concerned calling her baby & sweetheart & then he's all into getting his drink on like he doesn't care so what's up?

Reviewer: Dragn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-22-08 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Reviewer: Fri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

coolio man i hope nothings wrong with the maybe baby. . . i like it. I'm going to be waiting for the next chap of this.

Reviewer: kayjin927 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Could she perhaps be.... Nice story, haven't seen one like it in a while, hope it turns out to be all that you want it to be

Author's Response: Hehehe!! You'll just have to wait and see! LOL!! Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! It is really appreciated!!! I'm glad you really liked the story! Stay Tuned! =]

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

uh-oh... something's going on with 'Ro. Can't wait to see what happens next. There are a few grammatical goofs, but not so many as to ruin my enjoyment of this story. Couple of little easy fixes:

“Fine ‘Ro, I promise I say anything about this to anyone.” This needs "won't" before "say." And this:

Instinct told him to first check it she had a pulse, and was greatly relieved when he had found one.

Make it "Instinct told him to first check if she had a pulse, and he was greatly relieved when he found one.

Anyway, no more nagging from me. Write us some more, please!

Author's Response: Ahh! Thanks! I completely missed those! Thank you soo much for pointing them out! I tend to just completely miss them sometimes! Thank you for also taking the time to read and review! It is greatly appreciated! =]

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