[Report This]Date: 03-29-09 - 11:33 pm Title: In the Dark
I would've thought Ororo would have brought winds, rain, maybe even lightning or something to save herself. At any rate the premise is intriguing and $I can't wait to see how Logan reacts.
Author's Response: I've been using the excuse, "She was surprised." Plus, it had to happen, or else we wouldn't have Logan freaking out about her.
This review just inspired me to write more! Thankies!!
[Report This]Date: 03-04-09 - 07:26 pm Title: In the Dark
Okay, why did she not use her powers. I know she do not want to kill anyone, but come on. I just don't know.
Author's Response: I made it clear she was saving her powers for a big storm as a final attack, but was knocked out before she got the chance to do so. Hope I cleared that up well enough.
[Report This]Date: 03-03-09 - 05:24 pm Title: In the Dark
good start to what looks like a promising fic. it is well written and it caught and held my attention. i know i'm going to enjoy this. i can't wait to see what happens. update soon
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive review! This one really encourages me to keep writing and so do all the other good reviews :D Chapter 3 will be up sometime this week.
[Report This]Date: 03-02-09 - 05:00 am Title: In the Dark
That was a pretty big leap from the humor of the last chapter. I like the transition.
Poor Logan. Guy thought he would have an easy night of a workout and beer, and look what happens. Bet he's worried...
Bring on the next chapter, stat!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was a huge jump, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Chapter 3 will be up sometime this week, so stay tuned! Your review is immensely appreciated, so, I thank you :D
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