Omg! This story rocks! They didn't get the car back? What the hell is wrong with those crazy guys?! They are soo freaking clueless! Lol! Continue, I like this!

Alexia

Author's Response: Glad you like it :) Well bout those crazy guys, you`ll have to read what I have in store for them in the next chapter. So stay toon ;)

I'm curious that you took the first person approach. It's a hard thing to get Logan's voice, his character just right and probably considerably harder when English isn't your first language. Half the time I hardly think I have the feel of him but I've only attempted first person once and got a lot of feedback from some guys I knew, very helpful advice btw. So what I'm saying is I admire your daring. And I like the premise you have. I'm not so keen on Vic being Logan's half brother but I do like Victor so I'm curious to see him thrown into the mix interacting with the other guys which I think is seldom done.

I think it's so wonderful when someone can speak and write more than one language so I never mind when the spelling's wrong. I do, however recommend that you get a beta to help you since Pari added that to the site and there's a list of betas to choose from. Some words like beach and deam, which I think you may have meant bitch and damn respectively, are a little imperative to getting right for Logan and Victor I think. If you can't find anyone I'd be happy to help you providing you didn't have long chapters. I can't say I'm a good beta and I sometimes think I let my own style get in the way . I'm actually looking forward to seeing where you're going with this and what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I appreciate your offer and I`m happy that you liked my story. I put Vic in this because I like him very much and I like reading stories in which he`s involved so instead of looking for stories with him I decided to write one and about the half-brother thing, I saw that in x-men wolverine they presented them like that so I decided to take it in that direction.. About damn and bitch I knew I was spelling them wrong but I couldn`t remember there right form, so really thank you for spelling them to me. In my first language you spell it like you tell it if you know what I mean ;) And I feel really honored to have a review from you because I see you as one of the best writers on this side and I`v read all your stories (seriously) and I loved them so thank you again :))