Oh my goodness I sped through this chapter and laughed and laughed when I read the last part. Now that was excellent. This is a just a fun story. I like the guys interaction, love the addition of Ororo, was wondering how you were going to bring her into this, love that they went there for strippers, love Scott in this and Vic! How he didn't want to let Ororo go was hilarious then Logan promising strippers, oh that was fun. You have a decent feel of what men would do I think or at least how women see them. I get the feeling that they're younger here, less so than in the comics anyway and I like that.

There's one thing I'm not quite sure if it was a mistake or not. Remy's called Gumbo because he's a Cajun and Gumbo (a stew in New Orleans) is very popular down there. That said it was interesting to read how you wrote that, how Ororo just agreed when his nickname was explained. I didn't know if you planned it that way, that they weren't giving out their real names and that was part of it, just joking around with her so if that's the case then that was an amusing way of doing it. Overall a very nice job with Ororo in the end and a very enjoyable story. I'll be looking forward to another update!

Author's Response: Now you made me blush ;) I`m happy you liked it and about Gumbo, honestly I didn`t know that was popular name in New Orleans, tnx for telling me :) And yes it was planned for them not to give out their real names except for Scott, (well, you know how Scott is) but Logan cut him off. ;) Oh, and they are kind of younger here.