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Reviewer: shejams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-11-09 - 02:58 pm Title: Old friends

OMG!!! This is hilarious!!
I was pleasantly surprised with this story. It is great. I love this. I am still laughing.

The plot, the humor, the special guest stars and the characterization of Logan and company is well played out.

Logan- doesn't believe in love (except for beer, smoking and sex) when I read that line I knew this was going to be good

Remy- when he told his story of how a jealous Bella was taking up Karate lessons and praticing on him, had me rolling on the floor laughing.

Scott- breaking in almost poetry when talking about Jean brought tears of laughter to my eyes.

and Victor- typical Creed aw man what can I say *snicker*

RO- my girl, love her in this.

Kitty, Piotr, Bishop, Cable, Bobby and Pyro - perfect

Let me tell you, I wasn't feeling to great this morning but when I read this I felt much better ( laughter is really good for the soul)] :XD

Even though English is not your first language and that there are some spelling and grammar error , this is still an easy and a great read.

Thank you for this!

Keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so very much! I`m glad it made your day and that you like it so much. Next chapter should be up soon. Stay toon!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-08-09 - 02:25 pm Title: Old friends

I was glad to see you’d updated, looked for this third update all weekend, and I was very glad to have more Ororo in this chapter. It was quite interesting finding out about the Bishop connection. He’s always a favorite of mine and I like how you’ve used him here. I was also glad the Keystone Cops weren’t in this chapter, the way they acted and some of the things they said were a little out there and they kind of took away from the story a bit for me. I guess I just missed the guys and their banter while being outwitted by Ororo. After reading this chapter I'm looking forward to getting back to that, especially any forthcoming RoLo. I’m very curious to see how that’s going to come about.

Author's Response: I`m glad you liked it :) I`m curios bout RoLo myself btw. I think of all this things while I write, so all in due time ;)

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-09 - 01:01 am Title: Old friends


That was funny. I liked the free as a bird statement! It reminded me of the song freebird.
-Amber

Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh :)

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