I haven't read this or the next chapter yet but wanted to tell you the e-mail alerts seem to have a problem, the links aren't working, and I had no idea this was the favorite story that had updated. I'm going to read both chapters tomorrow at work and will let you know what I think. It'll be a fun little treat to look forward to!

Author's Response: Great! Can't wait to hear your opinion I hope you'll like it :)