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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-09 - 02:14 am Title: Decidions

Good chapter and nice to have Scott's POV. It amused me that Scott didn't tell Jean about what happened. I really do like him in this and Remy's not bad for comic relief. I can see things turning bad if Ro finds out about the bet though i am looking forward to some RoLo.

You know I was looking on the site for beta's and there isn't a listing at all. You have to click on an author's name to see if they're a beta. I often think I should try to beta for you but I've been having problems with the laptop so I don't think I'd be reliable. Also, I didn't think your characters came off racist I just found some of their behavior questionable, possibly because I'm not 'hip' so to say? I'd be interested in hearing what someone younger thought. At any rate hope you get some sleep and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I didn't think it would be very interesting if Scott told Jean about their trouble (I'm not going to let them off the hook so easy ;) I hope I'll be able to write the next chapter this weekend, that's the only time I'm not very busy and I can actually get some rest. Keep on reading :)) -Ana

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